How important is it to keep in touch with people around you like friends and family?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that it is important for me to keep in touch with my friends and family because I love them so much, and I can know their daily life and how they have been. However, there is a difference between family and friends in terms of a number of contact. I am almost time with family while I cannot often meet my friends; thus, I do not often send a messege or call to my family, but I contact to friends.
I have two group of friends; one is Korean friends, the other is foreigner group. I have studied in Japan and met many foreigner there. I was get along with them; so I wanted to know about them after leaving Japan. Though I am in Korea now and keep in touch with Korean friends more often, I also have contacted to them using Facebook, the social network service.
Even though I am a little lazy person and contacting with family and friends often is not easy to me, I try to continue to contact with them as frequently as possible. since I know the importance of them.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Miss [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. It is really an effort to keep in touch with our family and friends. However, it is something that we should always do becuase we wre doing it for the people we love.And we are lucky because we can contact our friends abroad through the different social networking sites available these days. Take care always!
~Kelly^^
I think that it is important for me to keep in touch with my friends and family because I love them so much, and I can know their daily life and how they have been.
>> Correct.
However, there is a difference between family and friends in terms of a number of contact.
>> However, there is a difference between family and friends in terms of how we keep in touch with them.
I am almost time with family while I cannot often meet my friends; thus, I do not often send a messege or call to my family, but I contact to friends.
>> I spend most of my time with family but I cannot often meet my friends, thus, I do not often send a messege or call my family, but I contact my friends.I have two group of friends; one is Korean friends, the other is foreigner group.
>> I have two groups of friends; one is Korean friends, and the other is foreign friends.
I have studied in Japan and met many foreigner there.
>> I have studied in Japan and met many foreigners there.
I was get along with them; so I wanted to know about them after leaving Japan.
>> I got along well with them; so I wanted to know how they are after I left Japan.
Though I am in Korea now and keep in touch with Korean friends more often, I also have contacted to them using Facebook, the social network service.
>> Though I am in Korea now and keeping in touch with Korean friends more often, I also have contacted them using the Facebook.
Even though I am a little lazy person and contacting with family and friends often is not easy to me, I try to continue to contact with them as frequently as possible.
>> Even though I am a little lazy person and contacting with family and friends often is not easy to me, I try to contact them as frequently as possible.
since I know the importance of them.
>> Since I know how important they are to me.
>> Since I know their value.
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