How important is marriage in today’s society?

2025-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Marriage is an important custom that still exists in today\'s society. It is regarded as a significant tradition not only in the past but in recent times. Marriage can greatly change one\'s life, giving people the opportunity to begin a new chapter. In fact, I am still unmarried, so I find it difficult to imagine what life after marriage would be like. However, I long for married life, as a spouse is someone who can understand me deeply and, someone I can truly rely on. In addition, I believe that marriage allows us to share our daily experiences and grow in ways that are difficult in a single life. Although people nowadays tend to marry at older ages and the number of singles is increasing, marriage is still an important part of our lives. I have also made a resolution to develop myself and become a better person for my future marriage and the life ahead.

강사 첨삭

Hi Isaac!
Welcome back!
I hope you had a good weekend.
Let\'s start this week with a bang.
Good job today.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Marriage is an important custom that still exists in today\'s society. 
>> Correct
It is regarded as a significant tradition not only in the past but in recent times. 
>> Correct
Marriage can greatly change one\'s life, giving people the opportunity to begin a new chapter. 
>> Correct
In fact, I am still unmarried, so I find it difficult to imagine what life after marriage would be like. 
>> Correct
However, I long for married life, as a spouse is someone who can understand me deeply and, someone I can truly rely on.
>> Correct
In addition, I believe that marriage allows us to share our daily experiences and grow in ways that are difficult in a single life. 
>> Correct
Although people nowadays tend to marry at older ages and the number of singles is increasing, marriage is still an important part of our lives. 
>> Although people nowadays tend to marry at an older age and the number of singles is increasing, marriage is still an important part of our lives. 
I have also made a resolution to develop myself and become a better person for my future marriage and the life ahead.
>> Correct

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