How important is nature to you? Do you try to get close to nature? How?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think nature is very important. Nature give us a lot of thing.
For example, many food(fruits, fish & seafood,,etc.), clear air, cool wind.
Of course, we are damaged by nature(typhoons, tsunamis, and many rain and snow).
But, I think it makes by human. Human & nature must live together.
When I see the clean sky, I feel good. So, I try to see the sky.
강사 첨삭
Hi Gerrard!^^
I appreciate your time in doing your homework. Great job!^_^
Nature give us a lot of thing.
>>>Nature gives us a lot of things.
For example, many food(fruits, fish & seafood,,etc.), clear air, cool wind.
>>>For example, it gives us many food like fruits, seafood, etc., clear air, and cool wind.
Of course, we are damaged by nature(typhoons, tsunamis, and many rain and snow).
For example, many food(fruits, fish & seafood,,etc.), clear air, cool wind.
>>>For example, it gives us many food like fruits, seafood, etc., clear air, and cool wind.
Of course, we are damaged by nature(typhoons, tsunamis, and many rain and snow).
>>> Of course, we have been damaged by nature like typhoons, tsunamis, heavy rain, and snow.
But, I think it makes by human.
But, I think it makes by human.
>>> But I think, it\'s made by humans.
When I see the clean sky, I feel good.
>>> When I see the clear sky, I feel good.
So, I try to see the sky.
>>>So, I try to look at the sky.
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