How important is nutrition to us humans?
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Nutrition is very important to human. Human can\'t live with nutrition. We can only live 2 weeks without any nutrition. So I think that nutrition is very important to human.
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Nutrition is very important to human.
>> Nutrition is very important to humans.
Human can\'t live with nutrition.
>> Humans can\'t live without nutrition.
We can only live 2 weeks without any nutrition.
>> We can only live for 2 weeks without any nutrition.
So I think that nutrition is very important to human.
>> I therefore conclude that nutrition is very important to humans.
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