How important is physical attractiveness in a relationship?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, if I were early 20s, I\'d say an appearance is incredibly important in a relationship. But, it\'s not important anymore. Just few moment, you could keep a good relationship. And then, you could see someone\'s personality and attitude. On the other hand, physique and body keep a good relationship forever [이름]ce you start to work out. Because it could show your industrious and patience. So, I think building a good body is more helpful than being handsome to keep a relationship. I\'ve been feeling to work out for having an Aussie\'s girlfriend [이름]ce I came to Australia. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Well, if I were early 20s, I\'d say an appearance is incredibly important in a relationship.
>> Well, if I were in my early 20s, I\'d say appearance is incredibly important in a relationship.
But, it\'s not important anymore.
>> CORRECT!Just few moment, you could keep a good relationship.
>> Just a few moments, you could keep a good relationship.
And then, you could see someone\'s personality and attitude.
>> CORRECT!On the other hand, physique and body keep a good relationship forever [이름]ce you start to work out.
>> CORRECT!Because it could show your industrious and patience.
>> Because it could show your industriousness and patience.
So, I think building a good body is more helpful than being handsome to keep a relationship.
>> CORRECT!I\'ve been feeling to work out for having an Aussie\'s girlfriend [이름]ce I came to Australia. :)
>> I\'ve been feeling to work out to have an Aussie girlfriend [이름]ce I came to Australia. :)
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