How important is public opinion in shaping government decisions in global issues?
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Considering Mr. [Name] recent action toward Greenland, public opinion does not influence government decisions in global issues. However, even Trump has toned down about Greenland issue in Davos forum because of the upcoming mid-term election in November. Public opinions matter most to the government, especially democratically elected ones because their whereabout depends on election. If they go too far and their agenda contradicts public opinion, there is increasing possibility of them losing elections. According to government’s foreign policy, it must align with public consensus. When administration apply draconian foreign policy, in most of the case they are not running for re-election such as Mr. [Name]. There are some cases where public anger reflected in the impeachment. During Trump first administration, there are various attempts to impeach him because of the his suspicious relationship with Russia, especially Putin, Russia authoritative leader.
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Considering Mr. [Name] recent action toward Greenland, public opinion does not influence government decisions in global issues.
>>> Considering Mr. [Name]’s recent action toward Greenland, public opinion does not seem to influence government decisions on global issues.
However, even Trump has toned down about Greenland issue in Davos forum because of the upcoming mid-term election in November.
>>> correct
>>> OR: However, even Trump has toned down on the Greenland issue at the Davos forum because of the upcoming mid-term election in November.
Public opinions matter most to the government, especially democratically elected ones because their whereabout depends on election.
>>> Public opinions matter most to the government, especially democratically elected ones because their future depends on elections.
If they go too far and their agenda contradicts public opinion, there is increasing possibility of them losing elections.
>>> If they go too far and their agenda contradicts public opinion, there is an increasing possibility of losing elections.
According to government’s foreign policy, it must align with public consensus.
>>> correct
When administration apply draconian foreign policy, in most of the case they are not running for re-election such as Mr. [Name].
>>> When an administration applies a draconian foreign policy, in most cases they are not running for re-election, such as Mr. [Name].
There are some cases where public anger reflected in the impeachment.
>>> There are also cases where public anger is reflected in impeachment.
During Trump first administration, there are various attempts to impeach him because of the his suspicious relationship with Russia, especially Putin, Russia authoritative leader.
>>> During Trump’s first administration, there were various attempts to impeach him because of his suspicious relationship with Russia, especially with Putin, Russia’s authoritative leader.
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