How important is salary to you when considering a job offer?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, that\'s a difficult question. Is it better to answer this question honestly?
To be honest, I can say half and half.
In Korea, there are minimum hourly and monthly wage standards, so it\'s easy to evaluate them on that basis.
So, koreans think it\'s a bad job if it\'s the same or not much different from the standard, and if it\'s more than the standard, it\'s a good job.
Therefore, I hope my salary it\'s higher than the standards set by the country.
Of course, it becomes clear that it\'s a good job when I receive money, but I think it would be better if it means recognizing my ability or value.
For example, rather than saying that you have to do this because you are paid a lot, I want you to tell me that but I highly appreciate your ability and value, so I want you to come to our company.
Taken together, it means that money is important, but it\'s also important to recognize my ability or value.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!~
I think that a significant aspect is the pay we receive from the company. However, the feeling of being valued and appreciated is extremely encouraging. It inspires us to work hard and give it our all ^___^ For me, there\'s actually more to working in a stress-free atmosphere than pay. Perhaps because my financial situation is not in dire need, my perspective may differ from others\'. ^^
Chammy
Well, that\'s a difficult question. Is it better to answer this question honestly?
>>Correct
To be honest, I can say half and half.
To be honest, I can say half and half.
OR
>> Honestly, I partly agree
In Korea, there are minimum hourly and monthly wage standards, so it\'s easy to evaluate them on that basis.
So, Koreans think it\'s a bad job if it\'s the same or not much different from the standard, and if it\'s more than the standard, it\'s a good job.
In Korea, there are minimum hourly and monthly wage standards, so it\'s easy to evaluate them on that basis.
So, Koreans think it\'s a bad job if it\'s the same or not much different from the standard, and if it\'s more than the standard, it\'s a good job.
>>Correct
Therefore, I hope my salary it\'s higher than the standards set by the country.
Therefore, I hope my salary it\'s higher than the standards set by the country.
>>Therefore, I hope my salary is higher than the standards the country sets.
Of course, it becomes clear that it\'s a good job when I receive money, but I think it would be better if it means recognizing my ability or value.
Of course, it becomes clear that it\'s a good job when I receive money, but I think it would be better if it means recognizing my ability or value.
>>Correct
For example, rather than saying that you have to do this because you are paid a lot, I want you to tell me that but I highly appreciate your ability and value, so I want you to come to our company.
Taken together, it means that money is important, but it\'s also important to recognize my ability or value.
For example, rather than saying that you have to do this because you are paid a lot, I want you to tell me that but I highly appreciate your ability and value, so I want you to come to our company.
Taken together, it means that money is important, but it\'s also important to recognize my ability or value.
>>Correct
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