How important is security? How do you make a house secure?

Great day to you Sir [이름]!

Happy Tuesday!

Thank you so much for always sending your essay.

I\'m sorry to hear about the story of Korean who died because of kidnapping here in my country.

I think nowadays, we can\'t say that there is a safe country where we can live in.

We should always be alert and make sure that we have a communication with our love ones and relatives who are in another country.

I hope that the terrorist attack will stop soon.
It is really heartbreaking to hear the news these days.
Seen you in class. Take care.

Teacher Nina

Following the deadly terrorist attacks in Paris that killed more than 120 people on last Friday, the Korean government is bolstering counterterrorism efforts in Seoul.

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>> Better: Following the deadly terrorist attacks in Paris that killed more than 120 people last Friday, the Korean government is bolstering counterterrorism efforts in Seoul.

There are concerns that Seoul could be a future target.

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We cannot be off guard, and through analyzing the changing international terrorism environment, we need to bolster our security posture. 

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Koreans residing overseas like in the Philippines are growing more wary of organized kidnappings there, particularly in light of the latest incident, in which a 74-year-old man was discovered dead 10 months after his abduction by a kidnap-for-ransom group.

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This year alone, 10 Koreans have been killed in the Philippines, raising alarm in Seoul on how to better protect its nationals residing in or visiting the Southeast Asian nation.

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Security home and abroad cannot be too emphasized.

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Although Korea is relatively a safe country, we need to boost security and be especially cautious when traveling to other countries.

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