How important is time in your culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my culture, time is important so much. So, most people behave quickly. For example, I usually have a meal for 15 minutes. However, because of the eating habit, I have had a stomachache. So, I used to try to have a meal slowly, but it is so difficult. During eating, I think what to do after eating. Also, when Koreans see slow videos, we feel frustrated. I heard that it is because of invasion of foreign power. Like this, Korean culture cosider time to be imperative.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Kimberly!
I hope you are having a great day! Thank you for your homework submission.
I did observe the importance of time in your culture. Just like you, I do my best to be punctual and on time.
It is also a way to respect other people\'s time. See you later in class! ^^
~ Teacher Gela
In my culture, time is important so much.
>> CORRECT
So, most people behave quickly.
>> So, most people move quickly.
For example, I usually have a meal for 15 minutes.
>> CORRECT
However, because of the eating habit, I have had a stomachache.
>> However, because of my eating habit, I had a stomachache.
So, I used to try to have a meal slowly, but it is so difficult.
>> So, I used to try to have a meal slowly, but it was so difficult.
During eating, I think what to do after eating.
>> During eating, I think about what to do after eating.
Also, when Koreans see slow videos, we feel frustrated.
>> Also, when we Koreans see slowed down videos, we feel frustrated.
I heard that it is because of invasion of foreign power.
>> I heard that it is because of the invasion of a foreign power.
Like this, Korean culture cosider time to be imperative.
>> Like this, Korean culture considers time to be imperative.
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