How important is tourism in your country?

This is wonderful, Sir [이름]!

Tourism industry can be improved and boosted only if the government would lend time and budget for it. This is a great help to improve the economy since the industrial sector has its downside nowadays. Have a great day!

~Teacher Eunice

Korea is not a country where have enough natural resources, so the main industry is a manufacturing business.

>>> Korea doesn\'t have enough natural resources, so the main business in the country is the manufacturing industry. 

However, manufacturing industries are not a future businesses anymore nowadays.

>>> However, the manufacturing industry is not a competitive business anymore nowadays.  

According to the movement of business, our country also try to find next businesses that are Artificial Intelligence and Tourism.

>>> According to the movement of business, our country also tries to find other business lines such as Artificial Intelligence and Tourism.

I am going to say about tourism in Korea.

>>> I am going to talk about the tourism industry in Korea.

I think that Korea has a lot of beautiful places such as Jeju Island, Selak Mountain.

>>> I think that Korea has a lot of beautiful places such as Jeju Island, and Selak Mountain.  

I am sure that these places are one of the most attractive places in the world. 

>>> correct!

>>> OR: It\'s certain that these adorable places in my country can increase tourism.

However, we are facing many problem to boost tourism that are relationship with ASIA country, general prices in Korea and the attitude toward tourists.

>>> However, we are facing many problems in boosting tourism like the status of our relationship with other Asian countries, the prices of commodities in Korea, and our attitude toward tourists.

Actually, we are in the nice environment because many artists became pretty popular in the world, especially ASIA. 

>>> Actually, we are in a nice environment because many artists became pretty popular in the world, especially in Asia.

>>> OR: Actually, tourism industry has a great potential because of the popular artists our country has. 

As I know, many people among the tourists visit Korea to see the stars they love to meet.

>>> As I know, most tourists visit Korea for the stars they would like to meet.  

That is the main reason why tourists would like to come to Korea.

>>> correct!

>>> This is the main reason why tourists would like to visit Korea.

The tourism can surely be main business.

>>> Tourism can surely be the main business in Korea.