How important is tourism in your country?

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As you know that our country is a very small also populations are quite big.

>>> As you know our country is very small and the population is quite big too.
 That is why still many people immigrant the other country and then they find out
better opportunities.

>>> That is why many people still migrate in other countries.

>>> They look for better opportunities.

Now Korea GNP is a higher then SEA.

>>> Now the Korean GNP is higher t[이름] SEA.
 People live most of very comportble life.

>>> People are living comfortable lives.

 You knew that Korea has a four seasons.

>>> You know that in Korea there are four seasons.
 But don’t have natural resources.

>>> It doesn\'t have natural resources.

Korean people are hard workers.

>>> Koreans are hardworking.
 Korea is developing many nice contents, like K- pop, drama, computer game tech education etc.

>>> Correct!

 Of course tourisms are very important for Korea.

>>>Of course tourism is very important in Korea.

Now many different departments are developing tour contents .

>>> Correct!

Last year one of high tourist visited to Korea which was good news.

>>> Last year was the highest count of tourist in Korea and it was a good news.
 I heard best tourism country is a France.

>>> I heard the best country that has good tourism is France.

 I wish more people come to Korea.

>>> I wish more people visit Korea.

These days all of the world are one [이름]d.

>>> Correct!

Whatever I want to go I can do it.

>>> Whatever I want to do I can do it.
 I hope our country depends on tourism for economics.

>>> I hope our country will depend on tourism for our economy.

We have to work harder more and more that anything is not free.

>>> We have to work more and more because almost all things are not free anymore.