How important is tourism in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think before the corona virus, lots of foreign people came to Korea and also other countries for tourism. And I think in our country tourism is important. The reason is that Korea is well known for tourism and lots of people visit Korea. I think it is also important because our country usually gets a lot of money from tourism. If we had no tourism in our country, maybe we coudn\'t be able to live happily and live well during corona because of money. So, I think tourism is really important in our country and almost every country.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your answer.
I agree that tourism is really important in almost every country in the world.
I hope that the corona virus pandemic will end soon so that the tourism industry will be active again. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I think before the corona virus, a lot of foreigners came to Korea and to other countries for tourism.
And I think in our country tourism is important.
>> CORRECT.
The reason is that Korea is well known for tourism and lots of people visit Korea.
>> CORRECT.
I think it is also important because our country usually gets a lot of money from tourism.
>> CORRECT.
If we had no tourism in our country, maybe we coudn\'t be able to live happily and live well during corona because of money.
>> If we have no tourism in our country, maybe we wouldn\'t be able to live happily and live well during the corona virus pandemic because of money.
So, I think tourism is really important in our country and almost every country.
>> CORRECT.
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