How important is tourism to your country? What is eco-tourism? Do you think it\'s a good idea?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I think it\'s pretty important how to lead to the attractive places. By doing that, they can get income. Also, I totally agree with eco-tourism due to global warming these days. In my opinion, I\'d love to recommend if you bring your own cup like tumbler in coffee shop, you can get a benefit a lot.
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~ Teacher Tricia
Well, I think it\'s pretty important how to lead to the attractive places.
>>> Well, I think it\'s pretty important how to lead to attractive places.
By doing that, they can get income.
>>> By doing that, they can produce income.
Also, I totally agree with eco-tourism due to global warming these days.
>>> CORRECT!
In my opinion, I\'d love to recommend if you bring your own cup like tumbler in coffee shop, you can get a benefit a lot.
>>> In my opinion, I\'d love to recommend if you bring your own cup like a tumbler in a coffee shop, you can get a benefit a lot.
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