How important is traditional clothing to you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think our traditional clothing is very important. Because our traditional clothing Hanbok was worn by our ancestors. And Hanbok is madewell. I think our traditional clothing has historical meaning and also it is more comfortable than other clothes.And I think Hanbok has our folk\'s spirit. And I also like to wear Hanbok. So I think Hanbok is very important to me.
강사 첨삭
HI [이름]!
Here are the corrections.
I think our traditional clothing is very important.
>> Correct!
Because our traditional clothing Hanbok was worn by our ancestors.
>> Because our traditional clothing, Hanbok, was worn by our ancestors.
And Hanbok is madewell. I think our traditional clothing has historical meaning and also it is more comfortable than other clothes.
>> And Hanbok is made-well. I think our traditional clothing has historical meaning and also it is more comfortable than other clothes.
And I think Hanbok has our folk\'s spirit.
>> Correct!
And I also like to wear Hanbok. So I think Hanbok is very important to me.
>> I also like to wear Hanbok and I think it is very important to me.
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