How important is travel in personal growth?
학생이 쓴 원문
Travel opens my mind and expands my world. When I come back home from a trip, it motivates to me work harder and saves up for my next trip.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Susan!
You are right! Traveling is a good way to learn more about the world and also about different cultures. It’s nice that as you travel, you become more motivated to visit more places.
- T. Caitlyn
Travel opens my mind and expands my world.
>> CORRECT
When I come back home from a trip, it motivates to me work harder and saves up for my next trip.
>> When I come back home from a trip, it motivates me to work harder and save up for my next trip.
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