How important is your appearance in your daily life?
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Normally, I always concern about my appearance, even in my daily life. Appearance is quite important factor when we meet anyone. It means not for beauty it means for tidy and neat. I think appearance is important.
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Normally, I always concern about my appearance, even in my daily life.
>>Normally, I am always concerned about my appearance.
Appearance is quite important factor when we meet anyone.
>>Our appearance is an important factor when we meet anyone.
It means not for beauty it means for tidy and neat.
>> It does not only focus on beauty but, it is to be tidy and neat.
I think appearance is important.
>>CORRECT
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