How important is your mobile phone in your business and personal life?
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The mobile phone is really important in my life and my business too.
I contact with my acquaintances and clients via the phone.
So If I lost my phone, it would be frustrating.
And also, I will feel disconnected from the world.
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Hello Charlotte! ^^
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful night. :)
~ T. Tricia
The mobile phone is really important in my life and my business too.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> My mobile phone is really important in my life and in my business too.
I contact with my acquaintances and clients via the phone.
>> I contact my acquaintances and clients via mobile phone.
So If I lost my phone, it would be frustrating.
>> CORRECT!
And also, I will feel disconnected from the world.
>> CORRECT!
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