How is adoption viewed in your country?
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Korea is a family unit, centred on blood relatives, is important.
So is the past, most people in our country weren\'t very friendly about adopt.
However, those who couldn\'t have children by getting married or those who were devoted to society used a adopt.
But now, the perception of adoption has improved a lot.
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Jasmin
Korea is a family unit, centred on blood relatives, is important.
>>Koreans are family orientated, bloodline is very important.
So is the past, most people in our country weren\'t very friendly about adopt.
>>In the past, most people in our country were not in favored about adoptions.
However, those who couldn\'t have children by getting married or those who were devoted to society used a adopt.
>>However, those people who can\'t have a child and those people who wants to help the society used to adopt children.
But now, the perception of adoption has improved a lot.
>> Nowadays, people\'s perception about adoption has improved a lot.
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