How is artificial intelligence helping us today?

2017-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

I know that artificial intelligence is helping us into many fields for some reasons. I specially want to talk about it in relation to sports. Firstly, it's important in sports as well because when we work out, we can check how long and many times we run by using smart phone or smart watch. Secondly, when we exercise outdoors, the weather is one of the most important part. In my case, my major is marine sports, so we need to check the weather by using weather agency when we have swimming or surfing class. And then, we decide whether we proceed our class or not. Lastly, we can check our body condition through inbody machine in these days. Afer that, we adjust what to eat and how to exercise to fit our body. In summary, artificial intelligence is really useful in our life.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!

Thanks for sending this in. I must say that the power of technology makes our life very convenient nowadays. Anyway, have a great day.

~Kelly^^

I know that artificial intelligence is helping us into many fields for some reasons.

>> I know that artificial intelligence is helping us in many fields for some reasons.
I specially want to talk about it in relation to sports.

>> Correct.

Firstly, it\'s important in sports as well because when we work out, we can check how long and many times we run by using smart phone or smart watch. 

>> Firstly, it\'s important in sports as well because when we work out, we can check how long and how many times we run by using a smart phone or a smart watch. 

Secondly, when we exercise outdoors, the weather is one of the most important part.

>> Secondly, when we exercise outdoors, the weather is one of the most important factors that we must consider.

In my case, my major is marine sports, so we need to check the weather by using weather agency when we have swimming or surfing class. 

>> In my case, my major is marine sports, so we need to check the weather by using a weather application when we have swimming or surfing class. 

And then, we decide whether we proceed our class or not. 

>> And then, we decide whether we proceed with our class or not. 
Lastly, we can check our body condition through inbody machine in these days.

>> Correct.

Afer that, we adjust what to eat and how to exercise to fit our body.

>> After that, we can plan on what to eat and how to exercise to make our body fit.
In summary, artificial intelligence is really useful in our life.

>> Correct.

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