How is beauty defined in my culture.
학생이 쓴 원문
Like anywhere else, a person who is slim, tall with small face are the standard of the beauty. Humans tend to get attracted by a person who has the perfect ratio of body because we are often exposed to television shows with many handsome and beautiful celebrities.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Great work on your composition! Keep up the good work!
~Teacher Selene
Like anywhere else, a person who is slim, tall with small face are the standard of the beauty.
>>Like anywhere else, a person who is slim, tall, with a small face is the standard of beauty.
Great work on your composition! Keep up the good work!
~Teacher Selene
Like anywhere else, a person who is slim, tall with small face are the standard of the beauty.
>>Like anywhere else, a person who is slim, tall, with a small face is the standard of beauty.
Humans tend to get attracted by a person who has the perfect ratio of body because we are often exposed to television shows with many handsome and beautiful celebrities.
>>Humans tend to get attracted by a person who has the perfect body ratio because we are often too exposed to television shows with many handsome and beautiful celebrities.
>>Humans tend to get attracted by a person who has the perfect body ratio because we are often too exposed to television shows with many handsome and beautiful celebrities.
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