How is beauty defined in your culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
In the past, beauty was defined as the things that is very harmonious with nature.
Over time, lots of people wanted to defined beauty.
So scientists made the thing that is very beautyful, and it is called \'Golden Ratio\'.
Lots of people thought \'Golden Ratio\' is the real beauty.
So lots of artists made lots of paintings that are used \'Golden Ratio\'.
But over time, lots of people thought \'the harmonious with color\' is the thing that is very beautyful.
And now, everybody thinks the beauty as \'the things that I feel very beautyful.\'.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! In this world, there shouldn\'t be any beauty standard. Everyone should feel good in their own appearance. Like what they say, \"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder\". :)
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In the past, beauty was defined as the things that is very harmonious with nature.
Over time, lots of people wanted to defined beauty.
So scientists made the thing that is very beautyful, and it is called \'Golden Ratio\'.
Lots of people thought \'Golden Ratio\' is the real beauty.
So lots of artists made lots of paintings that are used \'Golden Ratio\'.
But over time, lots of people thought \'the harmonious with color\' is the thing that is very beautyful.
And now, everybody thinks the beauty as \'the things that I feel very beautyful.\'.
>> Now everybody think that feeling beautiful in your own body is beautiful.
>> In the past, beauty was defined to be very harmonious with nature.
Over time, lots of people wanted to defined beauty.
>> Over time, lots of people wanted to be defined as beautiful.
So scientists made the thing that is very beautyful, and it is called \'Golden Ratio\'.
>> So scientists made something that is very beautiful and it is called \'Golden Ratio\'.
Lots of people thought \'Golden Ratio\' is the real beauty.
>> CORRECT
So lots of artists made lots of paintings that are used \'Golden Ratio\'.
>> So lots of artists made lots of paintings using the Golden Ratio\'.
But over time, lots of people thought \'the harmonious with color\' is the thing that is very beautyful.
>> But over time, lots of people thought \'the harmonious with color\' is the thing that is very beautiful.
And now, everybody thinks the beauty as \'the things that I feel very beautyful.\'.
>> Now everybody think that feeling beautiful in your own body is beautiful.
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