How is beauty defined in your culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think we defined beauty is exotic face, such as a high nose, big eyes. so I think the mixed-blood people are popular in korea. but it\'s very common. people have their own preference. the preference of beauty is subjective.
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Hi [이름]! In this world, there shouldn\'t be any beauty standard. Everyone should feel good in their own appearance. Like what they say, \"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder\". :)
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I think we defined beauty is exotic face, such as a high nose, big eyes.
>> I think beauty is defined by appearance, such having pointed nose and big eyes.
so I think the mixed-blood people are popular in korea.
>> I think mix raised people are very popular in Korea.
but it\'s very common.
>> It\'s very common.
people have their own preference.
>>CORRECT
the preference of beauty is subjective.
>>The preference of beauty is subjective.
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