How is beauty defined in your culture?
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In Korea, I think standard of beauty is always changing. Before, we thought that people who have big eyes and big noses are beautiful. But nowadays people likw people who have their own attraction. So I think there’s no defined beauty.
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In Korea, I think standard of beauty is always changing.
>> In Korea, I think the standard of beauty is always changing.
Before, we thought that people who have big eyes and big noses are beautiful.
>> Before, we thought that people who have big eyes and pointed noses were beautiful.
But nowadays people likw people who have their own attraction.
>> But nowadays, people have different perspectives.
So I think there’s no defined beauty.
>> So I think there’s no defined standard for beauty.
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