How is beauty defines in your culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
How is beauty defines in your culture?
Beauty is still powerful weapon in our culture.
Theseday, a healthy body is important point.
Standard of beautiful has been changed a lot than before.
People think that a face with characterhey are so are very charming.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! In this world, there shouldn\'t be any beauty standard. Everyone should feel good in their own appearance. Like what they say, \"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder\". :)
Theseday, a healthy body is important point.
Standard of beautiful has been changed a lot than before.
People think that a face with characterhey are so are very charming.
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Beauty is still powerful weapon in our culture.
>> Beauty is still a powerful weapon in our culture.
Theseday, a healthy body is important point.
>>These days, having a healthy body is important.
Standard of beautiful has been changed a lot than before.
>> The standard of beauty has changed a lot than before.
People think that a face with characterhey are so are very charming.
>> People think that a face with character are very charming.
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