How is language barrier a problem in your productivity at work?
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Time is a gold in my working space. Especially for a purchasing department, the deliver time of raw material decides how many final goods and service we can produce. However it is going to be an enormous loss if the producer delays our estimated time of arrival because we could not communicate properly. It would be more serious situation if they loaded totally different order that my company could not sell to our customers. It is not only happening to the multinational firm but also, domestic business can be faced on the communication issue. For instance, I wrote on the purchasing order \"I need 10EA sliding rails\", but if the supplier understands that I need only one-sided pair of rail, then we are going to have responsibility for the communicating problem.
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Thank you for this [이름] Ha. Oh, this is definitely a big problem because it would lead to customer dissatisfaction and could even lead them to looking for a different supplier.
Time is a gold in my working space.
>>> correct
Especially for a purchasing department, the deliver time of raw material decides how many final goods and service we can produce.
>>> Especially for the purchasing department, the delivery time of raw material decides/determines how much final goods and services we can produce.
However, it is going to be an enormous loss if the producer delays our estimated time of arrival because we could not communicate properly.
>>> correct
It would be more serious situation if they loaded totally different order that my company could not sell to our customers.
>>> It would be a more serious situation if they loaded a totally different order that my company could not sell to our customers.
It is not only happening to the multinational firm but also, domestic business can be faced on the communication issue.
>>> It is not only happening to the multinational firm but also, domestic businesses can be faced with communication issues.
For instance, I wrote on the purchasing order \"I need 10EA sliding rails\", but if the supplier understands that I need only one-sided pair of rail, then we are going to have responsibility for the communicating problem.
>>> For instance, I wrote on the purchasing order \"I need 10EA sliding rails\", but if the supplier understands that I need only one-sided pair of rail, then we are going to take responsibility for the communication problem.
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