How is my family feature?
학생이 쓴 원문
The personality and physical nature of all of our families including my parents is almost the same.
My sisters and brother including me closely resemble a lot our parents.
We are almost the same in height, appearance, tone, and personality.
However, the attitude of studying and the degree of exercise development are different.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Just focus on the agreement between your subject and verb.
You will be good to go once you master that.
Keep up the good work!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The personality and physical nature of all of our families including my parents is almost the same.
>> The personality and physical nature of all the members of our family including my parents are almost the same.
My sisters and brother including me closely resemble a lot our parents.
My sisters and brother including me closely resemble a lot our parents.
>> My sisters and brother including me closely resemble our parents.
We are almost the same in height, appearance, tone, and personality.
We are almost the same in height, appearance, tone, and personality.
>> Correct
However, the attitude of studying and the degree of exercise development are different.
However, the attitude of studying and the degree of exercise development are different.
>> However, our attitudes toward studying and the degree of exercise development are different.
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