How is New Year's celebrated in your culture?
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We have holiday of New year.
>>We have a New Year holiday.
We call \'설\'.
>>We call it \'설\'.
\'설\' means Lunar New year\'s day.
>>It means Lunar New Year\'s Day.
We came back to our hometown.
>>We go back to our hometown.
The family meet together in hometown.
>>Family members meet/gather together in our hometown.
And we have a memorial ceremony for ancestors.
>>And we have a memorial ceremony for our ancestors.
Traditionally in the morning of the New year, entire family together to eat 떡국(tteok-guk), a sliced rice cake soup.
>>Traditionally in the morning of New Year, the entire family eat 떡국(tteok-guk), a sliced rice cake soup.
Tteok-guk is the most representive dish eaten on New year\'s day.
>>Tteok-guk is the most popular dish on New year\'s day.
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