How is our accent affected by our birthplace?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that my birthplace affected all my life. My birthplace was my hometown and made my childhood. The person who have good childhood is same to have good weapon. When I was hard time, I could ride out from there. Because I have positive mind. My childhood made me positive person.
I went to the school by walk. We did a lot of activity without study. We have done something unthinkable these days. I can\'t forget these happy memory.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [Name]!
If we go back in the past, most people had a hard time living. However, this experience paved the way for us to become a better and stronger generation. People these days are described as a weak generation. They try to give up and quit if things do not go their way. I hope that there will be a situation that will make them stronger and more resilient.
See you in class!
Aki~
I think that my birthplace affected all my life.
>>> I think that my birthplace affected my whole life.
My birthplace was my hometown and made my childhood.
>>> My birthplace was my hometown, which made my childhood.
The person who have good childhood is same to have good weapon.
>>> A person who has a good childhood is like someone who has a good weapon.
When I was hard time, I could ride out from there. Because I have positive mind. My childhood made me positive person.
>>> When I had a hard time, I could ride it out. I have a positive mindset. My childhood made me a positive person.
I went to the school by walk.
>>> I went to school on foot.
We did a lot of activity without study.
>>> We did a lot of activities without studying.
We have done something unthinkable these days.
>>> CORRECT!
I can\'t forget these happy memory.
>>> I can\'t forget these happy memories.
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