How is social media changing parent and child relationships?
학생이 쓴 원문
Most young people use social medal apps kind of Instagram, Facebook at all times. So they don\'t usually talk to their parents a lot
even if they are at home together. I think it makes them care about only their followers as time goes by.
강사 첨삭
Most young people use social medal apps kind of Instagram, Facebook at all times.
>> Most young people use social medal apps like Instagram or Facebook all the time.
So they don\'t usually talk to their parents a lot even if they are at home together.
>> Correct
or
>>> So, they don\'t usually talk to their parents often even if they are at home.
I think it makes them care about only their followers as time goes by.
>> I think, this makes them care more about their followers as time goes by.
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