How is South Korea’s relationship with China and the USA?
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Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. China is a trade leading country. They would affect a lot of countries if their trade and economy would slow down.
- T. Beth
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Both countries are important us for maintain safety and economics.
>>> Both countries are important for us to maintain safety and economy.
To be specific, china is the most largest export country like electronic and automobile product components.
>>> To be specific, China is the largest export country for items like electronic and automobile product components.
Export especially accounts for considerable portion of korea economics.
>>> Export especially accounts a considerable portion of Korea\'s economy.
On the other hand, The USA is essential for countries safety.
>>> On the other hand, the USA is essential for our country\'s safety.
As you know, Korea is a divided country.
>>> CORRECT.
North korea has a lot of weapons including nuclear.
>>> CORRECT. (North Korea has a lot of weapons including nuclear. )
By cooperating with USA, we can be able to maintain stability.
>>> CORRECT.
But the trade war is heating up, If the trade negotiation result is come to badly, we have not choice but to damage korea economics.
>>> But the trade war is heating up. If the trade negotiation results badly, It would have a negative effect on Korea.
Because china is making a products by using imported components from korea to export finished products to the other countries.
>>> This is because China is making products by using imported components from Korea to export finished products to other countries.
At that time, If USA impose high tariff on that items, It would link to korea economics.
>>> If the USA imposes high tariff on those items, it would affect to Korea\'s economy.
by this reason, i wish them to solve this problem positively.
>>> Due to this reason, I wish them to solve this problem positively.
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