How is the Internet affecting our intelligence?
학생이 쓴 원문
It affecting to get down our intelligence, but it can also make us to get knowledge. I think the internet is very contradictory to me. Because it has the same but different meaning.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Daisy. :)
Thank you very much for diligently doing your homework. ^^
I agree that the internet both has its pros and cons.
While it is true that the internet can provide us accessible information and knowledge, the internet can also be a source of distraction especially for students like you.
Anyhow, I hope the internet is serving its positive purpose for you.
See you again tomorrow my dear. ^^
~Teacher Charry
Thank you very much for diligently doing your homework. ^^
I agree that the internet both has its pros and cons.
While it is true that the internet can provide us accessible information and knowledge, the internet can also be a source of distraction especially for students like you.
Anyhow, I hope the internet is serving its positive purpose for you.
See you again tomorrow my dear. ^^
~Teacher Charry
>> The internet can affect and decrease our intelligence but it can also provide us a knowledge.
OR >> The internet can affect and decrease our intelligence but it can also provide us information.
I think the internet is very contradictory to me.
>> I think the internet is very contradictory for me.
Because it has the same but different meaning.
>> It\'s because it has the same but at the same time, different meaning.
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