How is the Tourism Industry in your country?

Korea\'s tourism industry is the last among OECD. I\'m not proud of korea\'s tourist attractions. If I have to introduce some famous places to foreigners, I will show them some new buildings such as department stores, which I love to spend time in. I\'m thrilled when I look around fancy items. There are some beaches, cliffs, temples, restaurants and traditional places, which are nothing to me and probably to foreigners, too. I\'m proud of newly built archtectures but old traditional things . Since other countries have spectacular tourist attractions, I\'m not proud of it. Korea have no beautivul nature, especially in cities. I envy other countries\'s cities decorated and hamonized with splendid nature. We don\'t have characteristic appearances for tourism.

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How is the Tourism Industry in your country?

Korea\'s tourism industry is the last among OECD.

>>Korea\'s tourism industry is ranked last among the OECD countries.

I\'m not proud of Korea\'s tourist attractions.

CORRECT!

or>>I do not feel any sense of pride when it comes to Korea\'s tourist sites.

If I have to introduce some famous places to foreigners, I will show them some new buildings such as department stores, which I love to spend time in.

>>If I have to introduce some famous places to foreigners, I will show them some of the new buildings such as the department stores, where I love to spend some of my time.

I\'m thrilled when I look around fancy items.

>>I\'m thrilled when I look around and spot some fancy items.

There are some beaches, cliffs, temples, restaurants and traditional places, which are nothing to me and probably to foreigners, too.

CORRECT!

or>>We have some beaches, cliffs, temples, restaurants and other traditional places, but they mean nothing to me and probably to the foreigners as well.

I\'m proud of newly built archtectures but old traditional things.

>>I\'m proud of the newly built architectures but are old and traditional.

Since other countries have spectacular tourist attractions, I\'m not proud of it.

>>Since, there are other countries that have spectacular tourist attractions, I\'m not proud of it.

Korea have no beautivul nature, especially in cities.

>>Korea has no beautiful nature, especially in the cities.

I envy other countries\'s cities decorated and hamonized with splendid nature.

>>I envy the cities in other countries, since they are decorated and harmonized with some splendid natural sites.

We don\'t have characteristic appearances for tourism.

>>We don\'t have sites with characters for the Tourism Industry.