How is the traffic in your town or city? How do you feel about traffic jams?
학생이 쓴 원문
The traffic where I live is very good.
The good thing is that the subway station is close.
I can choose wherever I go
I can use both subway and bus taxi as a means of transportation.
One of the benefits of my country as I get older is the subway is free.
I have a car, but I mainly use the subway other than going to uncomfortable places.
Traffic congestion is not only a waste of time but also inconvenience.
If the road is wider, there are more cars and the time of rush hour is unpredictable.
As in any city, there will be times of congestion.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! I absolutely agree with you, any city has the tendency to have traffic congestion. It\'s good to know that public transportation is readily available in your country wherever you go. It\'s a matter of deciding which mode is the best. Check for the corrections I made on your work and have a fantastic day!~~T.Dee
The traffic where I live is very good.
>>CORRECT!
The good thing is that the subway station is close.
The good thing is that the subway station is close.
>>CORRECT!
I can choose wherever I go
I can choose wherever I go
>>I choose to take the subway wherever I go.
I can use both subway and bus taxi as a means of transportation.
I can use both subway and bus taxi as a means of transportation.
>>I can use among subway, bus or taxi as a means of transportation.
One of the benefits of my country as I get older is the subway is free.
One of the benefits of my country as I get older is the subway is free.
>>One of the benefits as a an elderly in my country is that the subway is free.
I have a car, but I mainly use the subway other than going to uncomfortable places.
I have a car, but I mainly use the subway other than going to uncomfortable places.
>>I have a car, but I mainly use the subway except when I\'m going to uncomfortable places.
Traffic congestion is not only a waste of time but also inconvenience.
>>Traffic congestion is not only a waste of time but also a source of inconvenience.
If the road is wider, there are more cars and the time of rush hour is unpredictable.
If the road is wider, there are more cars and the time of rush hour is unpredictable.
>>CORRECT!
As in any city, there will be times of congestion.
As in any city, there will be times of congestion.
>>CORRECT!
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