How is the working environment in your company?
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Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. That\'s good to hear. It seems like your company provides good welfare system to employees.
- T. Beth
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I`m satisfied with working environment in my company.
>>> I`m satisfied with the working environment in my company.
Actually, My team members are considering individual schedules.
>>> CORRECT. (Actually, my team members are considering individual schedules.)
My working time is from 9 AM to 6 PM.
>>> CORRECT.
After working time, I don`t need to walk on eggshells around my team members when I have not remained work.
>>> After my working time, I don`t need to walk on eggshells around my team members when I have no remaining work to do.
sometimes when we have company gathering, they didn`t compel to drink alcoholic drink.
>>> Sometimes when we have a company gathering, they don`t compel me to drink alcohol.
Above all, They are preferring making a schedule on the thursday instead of fridays.
>>> Above all, they are prefer making a schedule on Thursdays instead of Fridays.
And my company place emphasis on company rules.
>>> OR: In addition, my company put emphasis on company rules.
To achieve a goal, some of company not observe the laws.
>>> To achieve a goal, some of companies do not observe the laws.
in case of my company, Even though the goal wouldn`t fail, we can keep the company rules.
>>> In case of my company, even though the goal would fail, we try to keep the company rules.
in addition, the company offer various benefits for the workers who has childs, they give all colleague tutions and preschool child supports.
>>> In addition, the company offers various benefits for the workers who have children. They give all colleagues tuitions and preschool child support.
by these reasons, I have no choice but to meet company environment.
>>> Because of these reasons, I have no choice but to keep up with the company\'s working environment.
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