How is this coronavirus affecting the society?
학생이 쓴 원문
I worry about influence of spread out coronavirus in here. I read the latest newspaper which the component of vehicles imported from china is shortage so it lead to be late manufacturing the automobiles. because of this phenomenom, It have an adverse effect on korea economic.
Second, Some both western and europe countries are discri[이름]ating against and having a prejudice asian person.
If it spread out to the other countries, discri[이름]ation will be countinued without end.
But I want to shine a light on remove the virus quickly and perfectly by cooperate with other countires which assist with developing medicine.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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>>> I worry about the spreading of coronavirus in here.
I read the latest newspaper which the component of vehicles imported from china is shortage so it lead to be late manufacturing the automobiles.
>>> I read the latest newspaper which says that the component of vehicles imported from China is on shortage so it leads to late manufacturing of automobiles.
because of this phenomenom, It have an adverse effect on korea economic.
>>> Because of this phenomenon, it has an adverse effect on the Korean economy.
Second, Some both western and europe countries are discri[이름]ating against and having a prejudice asian person.
>>> Second, some of Western and European countries are discri[이름]ating and having a prejudice against Asian persons.
If it spread out to the other countries, discri[이름]ation will be countinued without end.
>>> If it spreads out to other countries, discri[이름]ation will continue to happen.
But I want to shine a light on remove the virus quickly and perfectly by cooperate with other countires which assist with developing medicine.
>>> But I want to shine a light on the eli[이름]ation of the virus quickly and perfectly by cooperating with other countries which are capable of developing a medicine/cure.
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