How is tourism helpful for your country\\\'s economy?
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Hello [이름]ng [이름]. Thank you for this one. I appreciate the effort. Tourism could definitely affect a country\'s economy. In my country, we are putting emphasis on tourism because we know it is helping our economy.
- T. Beth
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I read the newspaper in relation with the korea tourism which are focusing on shopping for the asians and introducing traditional construction for the other countries visitors.
>>> I read an article in the newspaper about Korean tourism which is focusing on shopping for Asians and introducing traditional construction to foreign visitors.
Especially, The fashion items like clothing, accessaries and so on are popular with chinese.
>>> To be specific, the fashion items like clothing, accessories and so on are popular among Chinese.
In [이름]ul city, tour guide take the asian visitors to [이름]ul street for the shoppers.
>>> In [이름]ul city, tour guides take the Asian visitors to shopping streets in [이름]ul.
It is one of a course of korea tourism concept.
>>> It is one of the courses of the Korean tourism concept.
>>> OR: It is a part of the courses offered in the tour.
Actually, Even though I coudn`t feel How tourism is helpful, but When I read a some news that had some conflict with china government, They forced the chinese to stop to visit korea.
>>> I actually couldn\'t feel how tourism is helpful, but I read news about some conflict with the Chinese government and they ban Chinese visitors to come to Korea.
At that time, A lot of owner of shops and duty free outlet are interviewing about that with some economic concerns.
>>> During that time, a lot of shop owners and duty free outlet employees were interviewed about it regarding some economic concerns.
It means the sales was slow down.
>>> It means the sales slowed down.
on these basis most of contries must have regarded importance about tourism.
>>> In this case, most countries must have regarded the importance of tourism.
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