How is Valentine\'s Day celebrated in your country?

2019-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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In Korea, we celebrate Valentine\'s Day as well. It isn\'t our traditional festive day but from foreign countries. Valentine\'s Day is named by St. Valentine who was killed because of blessing a new couple. The anniversary was originated from Rome, but a confectionary company in Japan had accepted it to promote their chocolate products. We are the neighbor of them so we were affected by the new feast day. Usually women give their men chocolate and confess love.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Thank you for doing your composition. So far so good.

Keep moving forward...\\m/.,..


T. Lainey <\",)))><

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