How is your country’s fast food different from other countries’ fast food?

2019-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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It will be likely to be more healthier than other countries. because my coworker who lived in western countries told me that It is more salty. but I`ve never been to other countries. so, I couldn`t answer this question. In the morning, you asked me are there any fusion food in fast food by using kimchi. It is not match fast food with korea traditional food like kimchi. but we had a lot of fusion cuisines like fried rice with various cheese. I just think that thesesdays, most of koreans fall`in love with making a dishes with a cheese including me. I pondert that why the koreans are preferring using the cheese ? because most of korean foods are hot. To neutralizing hot tastes, The cheeses are all time favorite ingredients for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you once again for this. I\'m a cheese person too. I love most food with cheese. I think cheese could go well with many dishes either salty, sweet or spicy.

- T. Beth

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It will be likely to be more healthier than other countries. because my coworker who lived in western countries told me that It is more salty.

>>> It is likely to be healthier than other countries because my coworker who lived in a western country told me that it is saltier there.   

but I`ve never been to other countries. so, I couldn`t answer this question.

>>>  But I haven\'t been to other countries so I don\'t know the answer to this question.

In the morning, you asked me are there any fusion food in fast food by using kimchi.

>>>  This morning, you asked me if there are any fusion fast food using kimchi. 

It is not match fast food with korea traditional food like kimchi. 

>>> OR: Fast food don\'t usually go well with Korean traditional food like kimchi.    
 but we had a lot of fusion cuisines like fried rice with various cheese.

>>> But we have a lot of fusion dishes like friend rice with various cheese.  

I just think that thesesdays, most of koreans fall`in love with making a dishes with a cheese including me. 

>>> I just think that these days, most Koreans including me fell in love with cheese on different dishes.   
I pondert that why the koreans are preferring using the cheese ?

>>> I ponder why Koreans prefer using cheese.  

because most of korean foods are hot. 

>>>  That is because most Korean food are spicy. 
To neutralizing hot tastes, The cheeses are all time favorite ingredients for me.

>>> To neutralize the spicy taste, cheese is an all time favorite ingredient for me.  

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