How life was in Seoul during your studies in Medical School.
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I lived in Daejeon where is another big city in Korea in medical school.
I lived in Seoul in training course. Actually that time I lived in Hospital all the time.
I could be day off once a week. When I worked in hospital, I worked for 24hrs everyday. So when I could go out, I almost slept.
Sometime I went to fanxy restaurant with my friend. It is a only luxury of us.
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Hi Dr. [Name], thank you for this, I have an idea now how your life was in Medical School. =)
Take care always, and see you next time in class! =)
~~ T. Ali =)
I lived in Daejeon where is another big city in Korea in medical school.
>> I lived in Daejeon which is another big city in Korea in medical school.
I lived in Seoul in training course.
I lived in Seoul in training course.
>> I lived in Seoul during my training course.
Actually that time I lived in Hospital all the time.
>> Actually that time I lived in the hospital all the time.
I could be day off once a week.
I could be day off once a week.
>> I could have a day off once a week.
When I worked in hospital, I worked for 24hrs everyday.
>> Correct
So when I could go out, I almost slept.
>> So when I could go out, I slept most of the time.
Sometime I went to fanxy restaurant with my friend.
Sometime I went to fanxy restaurant with my friend.
>> Sometimes I went to fancy restaurants with my friend.
It is a only luxury of us.
>> It was our only luxury.
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