How long are you usually allowed to play games and not study?
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I just play game on finish study and if finish study to play game 1hour so I want play game everyday and I can only play games at 8 o\'clock(p.m).
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How long are you usually allowed to play games and not study?
I just play game on finish study and if finish study to play game 1hour so I want play game everyday and I can only play games.
>> I can play games for 1 hour and only at 8 p.m. after finishing studying so I want to play games every day because the time I\'m given isn\'t long enough.
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