How long do you get ready for work?

2022-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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I spend my time about 40 minutes to get ready for work every morning. I think it\'s a short time. Prepar time should be short. Because I have to sleep more in the morning. Go my time is so tight. As soon an I woke up I brushed my teeth. And washed my hair. I didn\'t dry my hair perfectly because I didn\'t have many time. So I just dry naturally And I maked up my face very simply. When I go to the work. I didn\'t dressed up. I didn\'t spend my time for what to wear. I just wear what I see. Because I just work only today. But if I have a appointment after work with my friends. I woke up early and I make up face more, I dressed up with care. On days like that, my company crew said me. \" you have an appointment after work! You look different today\" Then I feel little bit awkward. It\'s obvious that I have a schedule. In colclusion, nomally I didn\'t spent my time long to get ready for work because I wanna sleep more!

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Good day, [이름]!
I am glad to see your homework today.  Keep on answering your activities so you could increase your knowledge and improve for the better. ^^

~T. Maine


I spend my time about 40 minutes to get ready for work every morning. 
>> I spend about 40 minutes of my time getting ready for work every morning. 
I think it\'s a short time. 
>> Correct. 
Prepar time should be short. 
>> Preparing on time should be short and quick. 
Because I have to sleep more in the morning. 
>>It is because I have to sleep more in the morning. 
Go my time is so tight.
>>The time going to work is so tight. 
As soon an I woke up I brushed my teeth. And washed my hair. 
>>As soon as I wake up, I brush my teeth and then wash my hair. 
I didn\'t dry my hair perfectly because I didn\'t have many time. 
>> I don\'t completely dry my hair because I don\'t have a lot of time. 
So I just dry naturally
>>So I just naturally do it. 
And I maked up my face very simply. 
>>And I put a simple makeup on my face. 
When I go to the work.  I didn\'t dressed up. 
>>When I go to work, I don\'t need to dress up. 
I didn\'t spend my time for what to wear. 
>> I don\'t spend most of my time thinking what to wear. 
I just wear what I see. 
>>I just put on what I see in my closet. 
Because I just work only today.
>>It is because I just work today. 
But if I have a appointment after work with my friends.  
I woke up early and I make up face more, I dressed up with care. 
>>But if I have an appointment after work with my friends, I wake up early, put makeup on my face, and dress up with care.  
On days like that, my company crew said me. \" you have an appointment after work! 
>>Only on days like that that my colleagues recognize and tell me that I have an appointment after work. 
You look different today\" Then I feel little bit awkward. 
>> They say that I look different on that day, so I feel a bit awkward. 
It\'s obvious that I have a schedule.
>>It\'s actually obvious that I have a schedule after work. 
In colclusion, nomally I didn\'t spent my time long to get ready for work because I wanna sleep more!
>> In conclusion, I don\'t want to spend more time preparing for work because I want to sleep more. 


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