How long do you spend looking at one website? Have you ever gotten angry with a website?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t know I spend looking at one website but I have ever gotten angry with website.
I have ever gotten angry because the website is not opening it was opening late so have angry with website.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
I\'m sure you can think of more things to write about the next topic.
Take note of the simple corrections so you won\'t repeat the same ones.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t know I spend looking at one website but I have ever gotten angry with website.
>> I don\'t know how much I spend looking at one website but I did get angry while looking at this one website.
I have ever gotten angry because the website is not opening it was opening late so have angry with website.
>> I was angry because I couldn\'t access the website easily.
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