How long do you think couples should know each other before they get married?
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Although it varies from person to person and how often you meet, I personally think that it needs at least a year for couples to get to know each other well and to get married. Although I believe that it is possible for people to fall in love at first sight, getting married is different. Marriage is completely different from dating. For a short period of time, you can show only good aspects of you to your partner and behave in a way that your date likes. And you tend to see what you want to see from your loved one. It means that you are not objective about his/her behavior, thoughts, or even flaws when you are in love. For instance, the difference of his/her could be an appealing point when you are dating, but after getting married, it could become a major cause of conflicts. People cannot disguise themselves for a long time. People generally are forced to disclose his/her true self as time passes by. And as you spend more time, you will become more objective toward your loved one.
강사 첨삭
It\'s a great Monday Sir [이름]!
How\'s the weather in your country today?
I hope that you had a marvelous time with your family for the past two days. ^_^
Thanks for your composition today.
I totally agree with you even though I am not yet married.
I often hear from my parents that marriage is really different.
Once you are already committed to a person, you can\'t get out of it in just a snap.
We have to be really careful in choosing the one we want to marry.
Let us talk more about this in class. Have a fruitful week ahead of you.
Teacher Nina
Although it varies from person to person and how often you meet, I personally think that it needs at least a year for couples to get to know each other well and to get married.
>> Correct
>> OR: Although it varies from one person to the other and how often you meet. I think that a couple need at least a year to know each other well and to get married.
Although I believe that it is possible for people to fall in love at first sight, getting married is different.
>> Correct
Marriage is completely different from dating.
>> Correct
For a short period of time, you can show only good aspects of you to your partner and behave in a way that your date likes.
>> For a short period of time, you can only show your good aspects to your partner and behave in a way that he/ she likes.
>> OR: For a short span of time, you can only see the good things about your partner and behave the way she/ he likes.
And you tend to see what you want to see from your loved one.
>> Correct
It means that you are not objective about his/her behavior, thoughts, or even flaws when you are in love.
>> Correct
For instance, the difference of his/her could be an appealing point when you are dating, but after getting married, it could become a major cause of conflicts.
>> Correct
People cannot disguise themselves for a long time.
>> Correct
People generally are forced to disclose his/her true self as time passes by.
>> Correct
And as you spend more time, you will become more objective toward your loved one.
>> Correct
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