How long do you think couples should know each other before they get married?

2014-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Although it varies from person to person and how often you meet, I personally think that it needs at least a year for couples to get to know each other well and to get married. Although I believe that it is possible for people to fall in love at first sight, getting married is different. Marriage is completely different from dating. For a short period of time, you can show only good aspects of you to your partner and behave in a way that your date likes. And you tend to see what you want to see from your loved one. It means that you are not objective about his/her behavior, thoughts, or even flaws when you are in love. For instance, the difference of his/her could be an appealing point when you are dating, but after getting married, it could become a major cause of conflicts. People cannot disguise themselves for a long time. People generally are forced to disclose his/her true self as time passes by. And as you spend more time, you will become more objective toward your loved one.

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It\'s a great Monday Sir [이름]! How\'s the weather in your country today? I hope that you had a marvelous time with your family for the past two days. ^_^ Thanks for your composition today. I totally agree with you even though I am not yet married. I often hear from my parents that marriage is really different. Once you are already committed to a person, you can\'t get out of it in just a snap. We have to be really careful in choosing the one we want to marry. Let us talk more about this in class. Have a fruitful week ahead of you. Teacher Nina   Although it varies from person to person and how often you meet, I personally think that it needs at least a year for couples to get to know each other well and to get married. >> Correct >> OR: Although it varies from one person to the other and how often you meet. I think that a couple need at least a year to know each other well and to get married. Although I believe that it is possible for people to fall in love at first sight, getting married is different. >> Correct Marriage is completely different from dating. >> Correct For a short period of time, you can show only good aspects of you to your partner and behave in a way that your date likes. >> For a short period of time, you can only show your good aspects to your partner and behave in a way that he/ she likes. >> OR: For a short span of time, you can only see the good things about your partner and behave the way she/ he likes. And you tend to see what you want to see from your loved one. >> Correct It means that you are not objective about his/her behavior, thoughts, or even flaws when you are in love. >> Correct For instance, the difference of his/her could be an appealing point when you are dating, but after getting married, it could become a major cause of conflicts. >> Correct People cannot disguise themselves for a long time. >> Correct People generally are forced to disclose his/her true self as time passes by. >> Correct And as you spend more time, you will become more objective toward your loved one. >> Correct

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