How long do you want to live? Please discuss your answer.

2022-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I guess 80 years old is the best for me. I also know that we can live more time than 80 years, but I don\'t want to. Because it just increases the time of getting old. It sounds for me the time to be sick increases.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I guess 80 years old is the best for me. 

>> CORRECT!


I also know that we can live more time than 80 years, but I don\'t want to. Because it just increases the time of getting old. 

>> I also know that we can live longer than 80 years, but I don\'t want to, because it just increases the time of getting old. 

It sounds for me the time to be sick increases.

>> For me, it sounds like the time of getting sick increases.

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