How long does it take you to take a shower?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. How long does it take you to take a shower?
It take to 40 [이름]utes to take a shower.
My house don\'t have bathtub. If I have a bathtub, I can take a shower for 2 hours. haha
2. Why do women spend longer time in the bathroom than men?
I think women and men has a different purpose of shower.
Women\'s enjoy shower time.
For rest and enjoy hot water for relax my body..
But I think men\'s purpose only one. \"Wash my body\"
So I think women spend longer time in the bathroom than men!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing this Angela,
I wold have to agree with all that you mentioned here. By the way, I made some corrections to your sentence and kindly practice them to develop your sentence construction. If you have some questions, you may freely ask them during our class :)
Aki~
1. How long does it take you to take a shower?
It take to 40 [이름]utes to take a shower.
>>> It takes 40 [이름]utes to take a shower.
>>> It takes me 40 [이름]utes to take a shower.
My house don\'t have bathtub. If I have a bathtub, I can take a shower for 2 hours. haha
>>> My house doesn\'t have a bathtub. If I have a bathtub, I can take a shower for 2 hours.
2. Why do women spend longer time in the bathroom than men?
I think women and men has a different purpose of shower.
>>> I think women and men have different purposes for showers.
Women\'s enjoy shower time.
>>> Women enjoy shower time.
For rest and enjoy hot water for relax my body..
>>> To rest and enjoy the hot water to relax my body.
>>> To rest, relax my body, and enjoy the hot water.
But I think men\'s purpose only one. \"Wash my body\"
>>> But I think men\'s purpose is only one. \"Wash my body\"
>>> BUt i think, men\'s purpose is only to wash their bodies.
So I think women spend longer time in the bathroom than men!
>>> CORRECT!
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