How long would you last in a zombie apocalypse?

2019-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

학생이 쓴 원문

I can survive 3 days. I will be affected by the death or changing zombies of the nearest people. My parents don\'t have enough strength and speed, so they may be a first target from the zombies in first day. The next day, my boyfriend will be a zombie definitely. Because no one can stop his curiousity. And the last third day, I would like to find my parent who were changed in zombies. I am a coward, therefore I will feel scared of being alone in a tragic apocalypse. Finally I hope to be bited by my parents. Eventually, we can be a new version of the family.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]ra! I really had fun reading your composition. Let\'s just hope we won\'t live to see a zombie apocalypse. ^^

Anyway, we\'ll talk about this more during class. See you! ^_^

~T.Avery

I can survive 3 days.

>> CORRECT

I will be affected by the death or changing zombies of the nearest people.

>> I will be affected by death or by people near me turning into zombies.

My parents don\'t have enough strength and speed, so they may be a first target from the zombies in first day.

>> My parents don\'t have enough strength and speed, so they may be the first target of the zombies during the first day.

The next day, my boyfriend will be a zombie definitely.

>> CORRECT

Because no one can stop his curiousity.

>> CORRECT

And the last third day, I would like to find my parent who were changed in zombies.

>> On the third day, I would like to find my parents who turned into zombies.

I am a coward, therefore I will feel scared of being alone in a tragic apocalypse.

>> CORRECT

Finally I hope to be bited by my parents.

>> Finally, I hope to be bitten by my parents.

Eventually, we can be a new version of the family.

>> CORRECT

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