How long would you last in a zombie apocalypse?
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Hello there, [이름]ra! I really had fun reading your composition. Let\'s just hope we won\'t live to see a zombie apocalypse. ^^
Anyway, we\'ll talk about this more during class. See you! ^_^
~T.Avery
I can survive 3 days.
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I will be affected by the death or changing zombies of the nearest people.
>> I will be affected by death or by people near me turning into zombies.
My parents don\'t have enough strength and speed, so they may be a first target from the zombies in first day.
>> My parents don\'t have enough strength and speed, so they may be the first target of the zombies during the first day.
The next day, my boyfriend will be a zombie definitely.
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Because no one can stop his curiousity.
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And the last third day, I would like to find my parent who were changed in zombies.
>> On the third day, I would like to find my parents who turned into zombies.
I am a coward, therefore I will feel scared of being alone in a tragic apocalypse.
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Finally I hope to be bited by my parents.
>> Finally, I hope to be bitten by my parents.
Eventually, we can be a new version of the family.
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