How long would you last in a zombie apocalypse?

Hello, Mr. [이름]. Thanks for your composition. I, too, have watched this movie you\'re describing and I actually like it.

Anyway, you did a good job with your grammar. Just pay attention on the use of articles such as \"the, a, and an\".

This would make your sentences better. I\'ll see you soon! Enjoy your day! ^_^

In the movie, victims of zombies may become zombies themselves if they are bitten by zombies.

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OR>> In movies, people bitten by zombies turn into zombies themselves.

I don\'t think It\'s a story that can happen in our world.

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It\'s ridiculous story, but it is one of the popular topics in the movie industries.

>> It\'s a ridiculous story, but it is one of the popular topics in the movie industry.

Few movies were released in the last few years.

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I have watched the zombie movie which title is \"TO BUSAN\".

>> I have watched the zombie movie entitled \"TO BUSAN\".

Main actor is on his way to Busan for business trip.

>> The main actor is on his way to Busan for a business trip.

While he was on the train, someone was bitten by zombie and he bit others.

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Main actor was on the train with his beloved daughter.

>> The main actor was on the train with his beloved daughter.

He didn\'t have close relationship with his daughter because of his busy schedule.

>> He didn\'t have a close relationship with his daughter because of his busy schedule.

It\'s the story that main actor tried to protect his daughter from zombie.

>> The story showed how the main actor tried to protect his daughter from zombies.

Finally, main actor and some people succeed to escape from the attack of zombie.

>> Finally, the main actor and some people succeeded to escape from the zombie attack.