How many aunts do you have and what are their jobs?
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I have three aunts.
First, the first aunt on my mother\'s side.
My big aunt is the owner of Blue Saigon that my mom runs.
Second, my third aunt on my mother\'s side.
My aunt is a flight attendant.
Third, second aunt on my dad\'s side.
My aunt is a famous designer and clothing store owner at Dongdaemun Market in Korea.
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Hello Su A,
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Teacher Annie (^^)
How many aunts do you have and what are their jobs?
I have three aunts.
>>> CORRECT
First, the first aunt on my mother\'s side.
>> First is my aunt on my mother\'s side.
My big aunt is the owner of Blue Saigon that my mom runs.
>>> This aunt of mine is the owner of Blue Saigon that is run by my mom.
Second, my third aunt on my mother\'s side.
>>> Second, is my other aunt on my mother\'s side.
My aunt is a flight attendant.
>>> She is a flight attendant.
Third, second aunt on my dad\'s side.
>>> Third, is my aunt on my dad\'s side.
My aunt is a famous designer and clothing store owner at Dongdaemun Market in Korea.
>>> She is a famous designer and a clothing store owner at Dongdaemun Market in Korea.
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