How many cars would you like to have? Why ?
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I think a car would be enough because, realistically, the keeping fee is so expensive T_T
But if I were rich, I would buy two cars that are big and small. Because the small one would be nice for close place and the big one would be great for far place like a tourist spot. At now with my driver\'s license, I want to have a car the name of soul from kia which is brand.
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Hi there [이름]!
Thank you for answering!
I hope you enjoy your weekend.
I think it would also be a good car!
I think a car would be enough because, realistically, the keeping fee is so expensive T_T
>>I think a car would be enough because, realistically, the maintenance fee is so expensive.
But if I were rich, I would buy two cars that are big and small.
>>CORRECT
Because the small one would be nice for close place and the big one would be great for far place like a tourist spot.
>>Because the small one would be nice for near places and the big one would be great for far places like tourist spots.
At now with my driver\'s license, I want to have a car the name of soul from kia which is brand.
>>And now, with my driver\'s license, I want to have a car names \"Soul\" which is from the brand Kia.
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