How many glasses of water do I drink everyday?^^
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I guess I drink about nine or ten glasses of water every single day. First, As soon as I wake up, go into the kitchen I drink a glass of water and while I’m at school, I drink about three glasses of water. The days I take kumdo class I feel very thirsty after that so I drink 3 glasses of water at once. It is like heaven drinking water after exercising. But rest of days I guess I drink a little bit less water. And then as soon as I arrive home I drink a glass of water and when I have dinner I probably drink two glasses of water. Lastly, I drink a glass of water before going to bed.
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T. DON
I guess I drink about nine or ten glasses of water every single day.
First, As soon as I wake up, go into the kitchen I drink a glass of
water and while I’m at school, I drink about three glasses of water. The
days I take kumdo class I feel very thirsty after that so I drink 3
glasses of water at once. It is like heaven drinking water after
exercising. But rest of days I guess I drink a little bit less water.
And then as soon as I arrive home I drink a glass of water and when I
have dinner I probably drink two glasses of water. Lastly, I drink a
glass of water before going to bed.
>> I guess I drink about nine or ten glasses of water every single day.
First, As soon as I wake up, I go to the kitchen and drink a glass of
water and while I’m at school, I drink about three glasses of water. The
days I take kumdo class, I feel very thirsty after that so I drink 3
glasses of water at once. It is like heaven drinking water after
exercise. But for the rest of the days, I guess I drink a little bit of water.
And then as soon as I arrive home I drink a glass of water and when I
have dinner I probably drink two glasses of water. Lastly, I drink a
glass of water before going to bed.
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